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I got first place in the writing contest and would get an award three days later. I was very shocked and could not believe it at first. My classmates cheered for me, and I woke up at last.

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award day, stage, thank, teacher, love, writing, help

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On the award day, I got my prize on stage and thanked my teacher. He taught me to love writing and helped me a lot.

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happy, keep writing, moved, hug, understand, confidence, hard work, succeed

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My teacher was happy for me and asked me to keep writing. I was moved and hugged him. I understand now confidence and hard work can help us succeed.

基础分： I got first place in the writing contest and would get an award three days later. I was very shocked and could not believe it at first. My classmates cheered for me, and I woke up at last. On the award day, I got my prize on stage and thanked my teacher. He taught me to love writing and helped me a lot.
My teacher was happy for me and asked me to keep writing. I was moved and hugged him. I understand now confidence and hard work can help us succeed.
良好分： I was told that I won first prize in the writing competition and I would join the award ceremony three days later. I could hardly believe what I heard and stood still in surprise. Then my classmates’ cheers woke me up. On that important day, I got my prize on stage and thanked my teacher sincerely. I told him that he let me love writing, and I would never finish the article well without his support.
As soon as my teacher saw me, he congratulated me and praised my writing. He encouraged me to keep practising all the time. I felt so excited with tears in my eyes and gave him a warm hug. From this experience, I finally knew confidence and hard work are the key to success.
优秀分： When I was told not only I had won the first place in writing contest but also that I would be invited to attend an award presentation in three days. Hearing the news, I couldn't simply believe my ears and stood there, frozen, until applauses from my classmates made me come to my senses. The big day finally came. Receiving the award at the stage, I expressed my thanks to my teacher, "It's you who make me fall into love with writing. Without your help, I couldn't have written this article."
Hardly had he caught sight of me when he said aloud, "Congratulations! You are a great writer, so just keep writing."With tears of excitement in my eyes, I rushed to him, reached out my hands and hugged him tightly. Just then, I learned self-confidence and hard work play an important role in success.