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掌握一项实用技能比学习课本知识更重要。

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初次接触：小学时观看音乐比赛

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小学时，我有机会观看学校举办的音乐比赛。这是我第一次看现场音乐表演。

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决定学习：被演奏者打动

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演奏者深深打动了我，我请求父母让我学钢琴。

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困难与坚持：认谱困难但未放弃

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开始的时候认谱很难，但这没有让我气馁。我把大部分空闲时间用来练琴。

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收获与感受：虽然辛苦但很满足

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虽然练了几个小时手指会疼，但能完整弹完一首曲子时，我感到很满足。

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结尾感悟：继续作为爱好坚持

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即使不会把它作为职业，我也会继续学琴，把它当作我的爱好。

只学习不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。所以掌握一项实用技能比学习课本知识更重要。小学时，我有机会观看学校举办的音乐比赛，这是我第一次看现场音乐表演。演奏者深深打动了我，我请求父母让我学钢琴。开始的时候认谱很难，但这没有让我气馁。我把大部分空闲时间用来练琴。虽然练了几个小时手指会疼，但能完整弹完一首曲子时，我感到很满足。即使不会把它作为职业，我也会继续学琴，把它当作我的爱好。音乐真美妙！

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As the old saying goes, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. So acquiring a practical skill is more important than learning academic knowledge.

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primary school, opportunity, musical contest, first time, live performance

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When I was in primary school, I had an opportunity to attend a musical contest. It was the first time I had watched a live performance.

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players, touched, asked, parents, take up, piano lessons

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The players touched me deeply. I asked my parents to let me take up piano lessons.

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difficult, read notes, discourage, spent, leisure hours, practice

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It was difficult to read notes at the beginning. But it did not discourage me. I spent most of my leisure hours practicing piano.

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fingers, painful, satisfied, play, music piece, completely

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Although my fingers were painful after practice, I felt satisfied when I could play a music piece completely.

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continue, learning, playing, hobby, wonderful, music

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I will continue learning and playing piano as my hobby. How wonderful music is!

As the old saying goes, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. So learning a practical skill is very important.
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When I was in primary school, I watched a musical contest at school. I loved it so much that I asked my parents to let me learn piano.
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At first, reading notes was hard. But I didn't give up. I practiced in my free time.
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Sometimes my fingers hurt, but I felt happy when I could play a piece completely.
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I will keep playing piano as my hobby.
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How wonderful music is!
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基础分：As the old saying goes, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. So learning a practical skill is very important.
When I was in primary school, I watched a musical contest at school. I loved it so much that I asked my parents to let me learn piano. At first, reading notes was hard. But I didn't give up. I practiced in my free time. Sometimes my fingers hurt, but I felt happy when I could play a piece completely. I will keep playing piano as my hobby.
How wonderful music is!
良好分：As the old saying goes, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. Therefore, acquiring a practical skill is more important than only focusing on academic study.
When I was in primary school, I watched a musical contest that deeply impressed me. I asked my parents to let me take piano lessons. At the beginning, reading notes was difficult, but I didn't give up. I practiced during my leisure time. Although my fingers were painful after hours of practice, I felt satisfied when I could play a piece completely. Although I don't plan to become a pianist, I will continue playing piano as my hobby.
How wonderful music is!
优秀分：As the old saying goes, All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. As a result, to acquire a practical skill is much more crucial than to learn academic knowledge on campus.
First and foremost, when I was in my primary school, I had an opportunity to attend a musical contest held in my school, which was the first time I had watched a live musical performance. The fantastic players touched me so deeply that I asked my parents to allow me to take up a piano lesson for beginners. What's more, it was quite difficult to read the notes in the beginning. However, it did not discourage me. I spent most of my leisure hours to practice piano. Although my fingers were painful after few hours practice, I felt satisfied if I could play a music piece completely. Last but not least, even though I will not pursue as my life career, I will still continue learning and playing piano as my hobby.
How wonderful music is!