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I ran to Gunter and told him something bad. The ATM did not work. I could not pay him money at that time.

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sad, embarrassed, idea, phone number, later

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I felt sad and embarrassed. Then I had an idea. I wanted his phone number so I could call him later. He said it was all right and knew I was worried.

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left, line, lucky, late, meeting

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I left quickly and joined the line. I was lucky not to be late for the meeting.

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returned, Vienna, called, remember, pay, insisted

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After four days, I went back to Vienna and called Gunter. He did not know who I was at first. I told him I wanted to pay my money back. He did not want to take it at first, but I insisted.

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met, station, thanked, trusted, paid, tip, praised, honest

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We met at the bus station. I thanked him for trusting me, paid the money and gave him more as a tip. He praised me for being honest.

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thing, trust, honesty, world, better

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From this thing, I think more trust and honesty can make the world a better place.

基础分： I ran to Gunter and told him something bad. The ATM did not work. I could not pay him money at that time. I felt sad and embarrassed. Then I had an idea. I wanted his phone number so I could call him later. He said it was all right and knew I was worried. I left quickly and joined the line. I was lucky not to be late for the meeting.
After four days, I went back to Vienna and called Gunter. He did not know who I was at first. I told him I wanted to pay my money back. He did not want to take it at first, but I insisted. We met at the bus station. I thanked him for trusting me, paid the money and gave him more as a tip. He praised me for being honest. From this thing, I think more trust and honesty can make the world a better place.
良好分： I hurried back to Gunter and shared the bad news with him. The ATM broke down as well, so I had no way to pay him right away. I felt upset and ashamed, wearing an awkward smile on my face. Soon I thought of a good idea. I showed my phone and hoped he could offer his number. Then I could get in touch with him when I returned later. To my surprise, he calmed me down and said it was fine because he understood my worry. After we parted, I hurried to line up. Luckily, I still caught up with all the plans for the meeting.
Four days later, I returned to Vienna and called Gunter as I had promised. He could not remember me at first, so I explained why I contacted him. He firstly refused to accept my payment. However, I insisted on paying back what I owed him. Finally, we agreed to meet at the bus station. During our meeting, I thanked him sincerely for his trust, paid the money and gave him an extra tip. He was pleased and praised me highly for my honesty. He thanked me for the tip too, and I said he truly deserved all of it. Looking back on this story now, I always believe our world will become much warmer if everyone shows more trust and honesty to each other.
优秀分： I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. The cash machine was also out of order! In other words, I couldn't pay him now. I felt so depressed and sorry, an embarrassed smile creeping into my face. Then an idea occurred to me. I pointed at my phone and asked him to give his phone number to me so that I could contact him when I came back here. Surprisingly, he comforted me that everything was OK since he had known how anxious I was. After we said goodbye to each other, I rushed to the queue. Fortunately, I didn't miss the whole arrangements for the conference.
Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. He didn't recognise me immediately when I said hello to him. So I explained my intention. At first, he refused to charge me the fare. But I insisted I owe him the money. Therefore,we made a deal to meet at the bus station. When we met,I extended my gratitude for his trust in me, gave him the fare and tipped him another sum of money. Satisfied, he gave me a thumbs-up, praised me a lot for my honesty and also thanked me for the tip, but I told him that he deserved it. Till now, every time I recall this experience, I can't help wondering if there is more trust and honesty in the world,how charming our world will be.