假定你是李华,上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括:
(1)你完成的作品;
(2)你的感想。
注意:
1)写作词数应为80个左右。
2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇:willow柳树,capture捕捉,inspire启发
要求:
语句通顺,语法正确,条理清晰,表达完整。

📖审题要点

写信对象:Chris;内容:分享公园美术课经历

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上周五我们在公园上了一堂美术课。

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作品内容:画了什么

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我画了一幅画。画的是湖边的柳树,还有几只鸭子在水中游。

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感想1:这次经历的感受

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这次经历很特别。我永远不会忘记。

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感想2:对自己的影响

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这次美术课让我有机会把艺术创作和大自然联系起来。我以后想多画自然风景。

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结尾:邀请Chris分享他的生活

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希望你能和我分享你生活中的有趣经历。

上周五我们在公园上了一堂美术课。我画了一幅画,画的是湖边的柳树,还有几只鸭子在水中游。这次经历很特别,我永远不会忘记。这次美术课让我有机会把艺术创作和大自然联系起来,我以后想多画自然风景。希望你能和我分享你生活中的有趣经历。

📌word choice

share, art class, park, last Friday

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I had an art class in a park last Friday.

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paint, picture, lake, willows, ducks

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I painted a picture. It showed a lake with willows and ducks.

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experience, special, remember, forever

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This experience was special. I will never forget it.

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art, nature, connect, draw, future

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This art class helped me connect art with nature. I want to draw more nature scenes in the future.

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share, interesting, experience, life

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I hope you can share something interesting from your life.

Dear Chris, I'm writing to share an art class with you. We had it in a park last Friday.

I painted a picture of a lake. There were willows around the lake. Some ducks were on the water. I felt very happy. It was a great experience.

I want to draw more pictures from nature in the future.

What about you? Please write back. Yours, Li Hua

基础分:Dear Chris, I'm writing to share an art class with you. We had it in a park last Friday. I painted a picture of a lake. There were willows around the lake. Some ducks were on the water. I felt very happy. It was a great experience. I want to draw more pictures from nature in the future. What about you? Please write back. Yours, Li Hua
良好分:Dear Chris, I'm writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday. It was a wonderful experience. I was asked to paint something from nature. I chose to paint a calm lake surrounded by willows, with a few ducks floating on the water. I found it both relaxing and inspiring. This experience made me realize how beautiful nature is. It also motivated me to draw more from nature in the future. I hope you can share something interesting about your life with me. Yours, Li Hua
优秀分:Dear Chris, I'm writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday. It turned out to be a truly inspiring event, both fascinating and instructive. First and foremost, assigned to capture the beauty of nature, I chose to paint a scene that I found particularly charming—a calm lake surrounded by willows whose branches were dancing in the breeze, with a few ducks floating gracefully on the water. What's more, it was such an extraordinary and memorable experience that I would always keep it in my memory. Last but not least, it not only provided me with an opportunity to connect my artistic creation with nature, but also motivated me to draw more pictures from nature in the future. I will appreciate it if you can share with me what counts in your daily life. Yours, Li Hua

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