假定你是校英文报编辑李华,外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)询问进展;
(2)提醒交稿时间。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

📖审题要点

发言稿主题:中国交通发展;首句已给

✍️写句子

过去几十年,中国交通发展很快。

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介绍共享单车

✍️写句子

共享单车很方便,也很环保。它在世界各地都很受欢迎。

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介绍高铁

✍️写句子

高铁体现了中国速度和中国智慧。它让人们的出行更方便。

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介绍新能源汽车

✍️写句子

新能源汽车很重要。它既节约能源,又减少污染。

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总结号召

✍️写句子

我们应该为中国交通的进一步发展做出贡献。

过去几十年,中国交通发展很快。共享单车很方便也很环保,在世界各地都很受欢迎。高铁体现了中国速度和中国智慧,让人们的出行更方便。新能源汽车很重要,既节约能源又减少污染。我们应该为中国交通的进一步发展做出贡献。

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development, transport, past few decades

🧩sentence construction

Transport in China has developed quickly in the past few decades.

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shared bicycle, convenient, environmentally friendly, popular

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The shared bicycle is convenient and environmentally friendly. It is popular around the world.

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high-speed train, speed, wisdom, travel, convenient

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The high-speed train shows Chinese speed and wisdom. It makes travel more convenient.

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new energy vehicle, important, save energy, reduce pollution

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The new energy vehicle is important. It saves energy and reduces pollution.

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make contributions, further development, transport industry

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We should make contributions to the further development of transport in China.

Dear Chris, I am writing to ask about the article. You said you would write one about sports in Canada last month.

Could you tell me how it is going? Please remember the deadline is this Friday, June 14th.

Your article is very important to us. Please finish it on time.

Thank you. Best regards, Li Hua

基础分:Dear Chris, I am writing to ask about the article. You said you would write one about sports in Canada last month.
Could you tell me how it is going? Please remember the deadline is this Friday, June 14th. Your article is very important to us. Please finish it on time.
Thank you. Best regards, Li Hua

良好分:Dear Chris, I hope this email finds you well.
I am writing to inquire about the article about sports in Canada that you kindly agreed to write last month. Would you mind letting me know the progress? By the way, I would like to remind you that the deadline is this Friday, June 14th. Your article will surely enrich our readers' understanding of Canadian sports.
Thank you for your time and effort. Best regards, Li Hua

优秀分: Dear Chris, I am truly delighted to express my sincere gratitude to you in that you kindly agree to write an article about sports in Canada last month.
First and foremost, I'd love to politely inquire about the progress of the article. Would you mind letting me know how it's going? What's more, could I remind you that the deadline for submission is this Friday, June 14th? Last but not least, your insights into Canadian sports will surely enrich our readers' understanding of global sports culture, which will be of benefit to us.
I'll appreciate it if you can submit the article on time. Yours, Li Hua

太棒了!